Thursday, 8, June
Here is the feedback the I received for my Foundation Portfolio Rough Edit:
- I like the ticking clock underscore; effective for building suspense
- Sound is a bit quiet
- Soundtrack/score needed
- Title & credits
- Soundtrack/score needed
- Title & credits
- The shots of the Protagonist walking up to the container are cool, but it feels like it is slightly dragging
- Good continuity
- I like how the keyboard is shown various times; good way to display the passage of time
- Some transitions are a little rough
- Good continuity
- I like how the keyboard is shown various times; good way to display the passage of time
- Some transitions are a little rough
-The editing style is good, nice transitions between the shots and good use of the shots available.
-There is one point, around halfway, that the transition between the clips don't go from one into the other straight after each other.
-The ticking sound of the clock in the background is a good touch, however at about 1: 45, the conjunction between the two levels of that sound is a bit distracting.
-This could be improved upon by adding in background music and maybe some effects.
-Otherwise, it is a good start
-The ticking sound of the clock in the background is a good touch, however at about 1: 45, the conjunction between the two levels of that sound is a bit distracting.
-This could be improved upon by adding in background music and maybe some effects.
-Otherwise, it is a good start
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